Extreme Final Shoot

I feel that my final shoot followed and was in keeping with my design and development process; within putting together all the elements i felt that they blended together well. I was a little disappointed with the positioning of the hair lace covering i would have liked it to float above the shape of the rolls this way more of the flower pin curls would be visible although this couldn't be achieved with the materials and time i had. If i were to do this again i would have made the structure very hard out of a gel or glue? Although this could make the hair lace look thick or i would have attached thin translucent bits of string and held this up when the images were being taken. I further feel that the parting of the models hair is very obvious this could have been brushed over a little, and the rolls a lot bigger, i imagine the whole design if i were to re do to be much bigger and for all the elements to flow into one another. Although i feel what i had to work with i did the best i could i feel these images portray the provocative, timeless female that i wanted and I'm excited for the next shoot. For this i want to pre make the wig and just be able to put it on as having more time i can get everything to look how i would like it.