Presentation feedback

My designs were very well thought out combined both the elements from my culture and i had a well developed idea about who my pin up girl was this conveyed within the designs, the exaggerated structure was effective.

Points that i needed to develop further and experiment with were:

• Development of the extreme style, looked to sharp and strong dosent look feminine compared to the other styles, it looked very victorian, harsh- need to develop this idea liked the elements but need to play with this to blend more flowing from the moderate witch was very well done. 
• Colour of Hair lace, electric green colour? play with this see what works with the style and with the wig. 
• Idea- Bondage tape a modern material could look effective with the hair lace?

I found this helpful as it allowed me to see were my designs were going and what designs needed developing further. I feel that now having looked at my extreme style i can see that the femininity is lost not through the elements but through the overall shape. I want to experiment with this to create a designs that combines the elements and flows within the other two styles i have already created. I further need to experiment further with colours of hair lace.